The book Im reading is called “The Categorical Universe of Candice Phee”. Some thing I didn't like was how the book started off with her in school and how she was a nerd. May be if they had describe the school a bit more. And with what was going on than probably it would make a reader feel more like in the book. And like they were a character in it. I think also that the characters needs to have a big part in the book. Like the Candice should write about how she feels a school nerd. But other wise then that i think the setting and character were sort of bad.
I keep wondering about how Candice is going to write all those paragraphs with out being distracted on something else of her life. And how she is going to organize on not going in to something extra that doesn't belong in her paragraphs. I think if she write a list of all things she is going to write about and just have some extra as back up if she cant complete her first choice. And after that she can organize them from a-z it would be much easier to do. Cause I think it would be easy to do it like that
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