Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Paragraph 1 and 2 about the article and poem

Paragraph 1

The Sweatshop


In my article that I read its basically about how people don't feel like there humans any more but as if they were robots and they just did the same things over and over again. What I found that helped me back up my claim " that I often forget who I am. I get lost in the frightful tumult. My self is destroyed, I become a machine. I work and work and work endlessly."These four sentences help me figure out what the article is about a. I don't approve about these working condition because what i read its letting me know that people where when they work lose of a human has  like feeling. When I read this article I was surprise know that people that aren't being treated like humans. Basically they are breaking rule number 23 they are not being treated fairly because they don't get breaks even it says that some time they feel like if they were  slaves.





Paragraph 2

Simone Weil: The Year Of Factory Work (1934-1935)
By Edward Hirsch

I the poem that I read its almost the same as the article but this one was about how people in this factory are like a slave. I know thinks because in the poem it says that "The irreducible slavery of workers. To work. In order to eat, to eat in order to work." I think that reading a article is much better than reading a poem because in the article the writer gets to right in as much feeling as they want to and they get to not worry much in about how a poem is written. This really did not effect the way I read both poem and article because  either way i understood what they were trying to say but in the poem i thought it was a bit trickier to understand what they were trying to say. I thought that reading the poem it helped me understand a bit more than what the writer was trying to say.